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One change to make your school or neighborhood better
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The bus stop outside our school has no shelter, so when it rains — which is most afternoons this month — a whole line of students stands soaked waiting for the bus. The one change I would make is a simple covered shelter with a bench at that stop. It would not cost much, and it would
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Jello
You picked a really concrete problem. What is the strongest reason a shelter matters — comfort, health, or something else?Valentina
Health I think. My friend missed a week of school after getting sick from the rain.Jello
That's a powerful reason — and a specific example makes it land. Try opening with that moment, then make your ask for the shelter.Flag alerts3